Waaay to simple for my taste, looks basically stock, sry

May i please join in? This car is way overdone, and it is also very boring to see. It is an iconic car, sure, but not very interesting anymore.

OK, I'm being real nice here.

I never do back off until new people do get better. Sucking up to new people only makes them do the s*** they're doing and only makes them worse. You gotta listen to constuctive criticism, man, not tell people to back off, if you want to improve.

I'll tell ya about this car, it's much too plain. Pros hate plain, five-second jobs around here. Sure, you can get away with it on NFSCars, but this is NFSUnlimited, pretty much the elite when it comes to guys with good taste and enough time and effort to make masterpieces. I don't consider myself much of a pro, but I'm speaking from experience here. I didn't tell this one guy to 'go away!' when he dissed me, I just took his word for it and worked on my stuff.

You ought to take some styling cues from guys like Nasko, RAYADO, baumaxx1 or skyline95, they're some of the best around here. Stop trying to 'do your own thing', or nobody will ever notice you and just pass you up as a rookie who don't know shit and can go rot in hell. Take me as a perfect example; two years here and I'm still begging people for comments.

I could be a whole lot nastier, and tell you to leave the site, point-blank, and badger you into it by stuffing all my damn cars into duels against yours, but frankly I ain't got that many cars and I'd rather help you. Oh, and the screen is too dark and you should set the screen resolution to 1024x760 or something like that for a clearer shot, I can't see much of your car.

Kepp all that in mind and you'll be ok. Oh, and do some commenting on other users' cars, too.