Odd rims are unnecessary, although they are not the worst example, and the colours seem a little unexciting. It doesn't stand out enough. Too methodical and safe... needs a bit of personality. The blue you have used is also a bit sull, I think it's a good choice, but the silver may be better as another colour to give it a bit of life. Needs something vivid at least. Layout is well thought out though.

simply and nice